When you plunged
The light of Tuscany wavered
And swung through the pool
From top to bottom.
I loved your wet head and smashing crawl,
Your fine swimmer's back and shoulders
Surfacing and surfacing again
This year and every year since.
I sat dry-throated on the warm stones.
You were beyond me.
The mellowed clarities, the grape-deep air
Thinned and disappointed.
Thank God for the slow loadening,
When I hold you now
We are close and deep
As the atmosphere on water.
My two hands are plumbed water.
You are my palpable, lithe
Otter of memory
In the pool of the moment,
Turning to swim on your back,
Each silent, thigh-shaking kick
Re-tilting the light,
Heaving the cool at your neck.
And suddenly you're out,
Back again, intent as ever,
Heavy and frisky in your freshened pelt,
Printing the stones.
Comments (5)
Anonymous said
at 9:31 am on May 10, 2007
I enjoyed the way you related the poems to your own viewpoint, especially the one about the otter. To make your analysis stronger, you could use more textual support from the poems. Also, it would help if you defined some of the more unusual words for us as readers.
Very appealing layout - simple and organized.
Anonymous said
at 9:40 am on May 10, 2007
I really liked how you added a link to his other poems so that I was able to read more. I liked the poems that you picked by Seamus Heaney they were very interesting and you gave good insight on the poems.
Anonymous said
at 9:42 am on May 10, 2007
Your interpretations are wonderful. I reeeally enjoyed your last paragraph on The Otter. You found a way to relate to the reader and compile your own experiences with Heaneys. Great job.
Anonymous said
at 10:00 am on May 10, 2007
Love the otter poem, you guys did a good job
Anonymous said
at 10:03 am on May 10, 2007
I think you did a good job explaining the authors life. I agree with the first comment though. I think your explinations were short and to the point, but it would have been nice to use examples from the poem or given other opinions or scholarly reviews. Other than that, It looks good!!
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